Ads 468x60px

Labels

Sunday, May 04, 2008

Where did I go wrong . . .



I thought I was the only man
And loved you with all I can
It all felt so correct
And my night seemed so bright
Your presence felt so good
Even in my every single mood
Nothing was out of place
And I did never find a trace
Just
  Where did I go wrong.

Here I stand, drenched in rain
Wondering where I am,
And without a soul or a heart,
When you left me to part. . .

Dont you ever know?
Did you always pretend?
I dunno where you are
Or with who you are

You are my soul I never had


I feel your precense everywhere
Its not something I dont care
What did I really do
And make you abandon me so
There's nothing I need to live for
Everything round me starts to sour
Nothing else felt so right
But I dont wanna fight
Just
  Where did I go wrong.

© 2008 by Sunandha V. 

1 comments:

Deejay's Idle Drones said...

Hey !! Ran through some of the poems. You've got a flair with translating thoughts into simple words. Kudos !! But, seems like it's an out-and-out romantic overload ... why don't you consider branching off into other genres too ?

Post a Comment